An attempt at Haiku....


Oh! The Dancers Eyes
Soulful, Emotions Umpteen
Reflects life's seasons..


This is in response to the weekly prompt at Write tribe of "Haiku" - My first reaction was to give this a skip! Of course having a in house haiku expert only made matters worst - he compiles a haiku on my attempts at creating one!

Girl trying haiku
Without any thought in mind
Oh the poor female


This pic was clicked at Nrityagram - this place should figure in your itinerary if you are a connoisseur of Indian dance!

14 comments:

  1. Difficult to say which one I liked more! :D

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  2. Hehe good ones! Ofcos both of them :P

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  3. Tee hee!! :D
    1. You finally came up with one :P
    2. The haiku about you is awesome :D
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    3. Those eyes... I love them... Eyes can tell soooo much more than what we actually are speaking na :) :)

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  4. Loved both of them. Will you kick me if I say I like the second one more :)

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  5. Good one for the photo

    PhenoMenon
    http://throodalookingglass.com/swaying-trees/

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  6. Good one, Meena and of course your better half is best at it! :D

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  7. The dancer's eyes are so bful and Haiku is bful too ! keep them coming

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  8. The second haiku is better :D :D the imagery depicted in that is something we can relate to meena :-)

    Richa

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  9. You should have written a Haiku on food no..! dear foodie darling.. ;) I am all over both of them, I admire people who can haiku when I am trying desperately to give it a miss or a diss.. !!

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  10. nice one!
    I loved the first one.. its beautiful
    and the second one is me! :(

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  11. Haha! Wonderful haiku, both! Indeed, the dancers' eyes and emotions are stellar!
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    And yes, some prompts can be challenging and our first reaction would be an apprehensive one, doubting our own abilities. You did a brilliant job! I'd like you to read this: Eggshells, I remembered this when I read about your first reaction to the prompt. Keep writing!

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