An attempt at Haiku....


Oh! The Dancers Eyes
Soulful, Emotions Umpteen
Reflects life's seasons..


This is in response to the weekly prompt at Write tribe of "Haiku" - My first reaction was to give this a skip! Of course having a in house haiku expert only made matters worst - he compiles a haiku on my attempts at creating one!

Girl trying haiku
Without any thought in mind
Oh the poor female


This pic was clicked at Nrityagram - this place should figure in your itinerary if you are a connoisseur of Indian dance!
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14 comments:

  1. MridulaJuly 14, 2013 at 6:02 PM

    Difficult to say which one I liked more! :D

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  2. SwaramJuly 14, 2013 at 6:15 PM

    Hehe good ones! Ofcos both of them :P

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  3. Bhavya NJuly 15, 2013 at 10:29 AM

    Tee hee!! :D
    1. You finally came up with one :P
    2. The haiku about you is awesome :D
    and
    3. Those eyes... I love them... Eyes can tell soooo much more than what we actually are speaking na :) :)

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  4. Tall Girl in Japan July 15, 2013 at 11:40 AM

    Loved both of them. Will you kick me if I say I like the second one more :)

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  5. UnknownJuly 15, 2013 at 12:43 PM

    Good one for the photo

    PhenoMenon
    http://throodalookingglass.com/swaying-trees/

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  6. Shilpa GargJuly 15, 2013 at 2:53 PM

    Good one, Meena and of course your better half is best at it! :D

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  7. Afshan ShaikJuly 15, 2013 at 3:32 PM

    The dancer's eyes are so bful and Haiku is bful too ! keep them coming

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  8. Richa SinghJuly 15, 2013 at 7:05 PM

    The second haiku is better :D :D the imagery depicted in that is something we can relate to meena :-)

    Richa

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  9. AnonymousJuly 16, 2013 at 12:27 AM

    You should have written a Haiku on food no..! dear foodie darling.. ;) I am all over both of them, I admire people who can haiku when I am trying desperately to give it a miss or a diss.. !!

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  10. Preetilata【ツ】July 16, 2013 at 12:55 AM

    Good ones Meena.

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  11. PixieJuly 16, 2013 at 10:31 PM

    nice one!
    I loved the first one.. its beautiful
    and the second one is me! :(

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  12. Sankara Jayanth SJuly 17, 2013 at 10:03 AM

    Haha! Wonderful haiku, both! Indeed, the dancers' eyes and emotions are stellar!
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    And yes, some prompts can be challenging and our first reaction would be an apprehensive one, doubting our own abilities. You did a brilliant job! I'd like you to read this: Eggshells, I remembered this when I read about your first reaction to the prompt. Keep writing!

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  13. Ankita July 17, 2013 at 8:19 PM

    thats a nice Haiku :)

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  14. Anil SawanJuly 19, 2013 at 5:41 PM

    beautiful!

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