The Cardinal Sin!


A true ascetic priest, he rued his lack of self control that made him indulge in”cardinal sin” right at the altar! He couldn’t deny himself the pleasures that filled his body as it made its way down caressing his senses. Until one day, he was caught with his hands in the….

… the cookie-jar ;)

My first attempt at a 55 word Fiction. Linking this to 55 word fiction at Write Tribe hosted by Vidya Sury

12 comments:

  1. ha ha ...but i caught you his time..just that i imagined a chocolate and not cookies

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  2. NO I was a bit scared. thank God it turned out to be cookies.

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  3. Too much! Enjoyed it, Meena, you naughty girl! :)

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  4. hehe.. I enjoyed this. I knew there had to be a twist but I really didnt think of food.

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  5. LOL
    cookie jar ;)
    I love how u bring suspense + humor

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  6. He he he ...loved this one Meena :)

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  7. lol
    I thought he would have downed more wine than he was supposed to :D

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  8. What a way to bring out the 'cardinal sin' :D :D

    Richa

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