A true ascetic priest, he rued his lack of self control that made him indulge in”cardinal sin” right at the altar! He couldn’t deny himself the pleasures that filled his body as it made its way down caressing his senses. Until one day, he was caught with his hands in the….
… the cookie-jar ;)
My first attempt at a 55 word Fiction. Linking this to 55 word fiction at Write Tribe hosted by Vidya Sury
haha!! Good one!
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ha ha ...but i caught you his time..just that i imagined a chocolate and not cookies
ReplyDeleteNO I was a bit scared. thank God it turned out to be cookies.
ReplyDeleteToo much! Enjoyed it, Meena, you naughty girl! :)
ReplyDeleteLOL good one :)
ReplyDeleteHa Ha good one :)
ReplyDeletehehe.. I enjoyed this. I knew there had to be a twist but I really didnt think of food.
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ReplyDeletecookie jar ;)
I love how u bring suspense + humor
He he he ...loved this one Meena :)
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ReplyDeleteI thought he would have downed more wine than he was supposed to :D
Excellent!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a way to bring out the 'cardinal sin' :D :D
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